Dear Mom and Dad,
I would like you to consider buying me an x box 360. I thought this because it will keep you busy. I also thought this because MINECRAFT helps me with geometry. I also thought this because you could download some edgucashanl games. Please will you get me an Xbox 360?
Your dater
Lauren XOXO please
Lauren, this is a much more persuasive post than your last. I like that you have spent time considering the benefits beyond what would be fun about xbox. A good idea would be to identify some of the educational games that could be played, as well as information about how MINECRAFT helps you with geometry. We know you love to play outside, and that is so important that we don't want you to be inside on video games all day.
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Mom
Maby we cold have 1 howr to play the XBOX360 instead of all day playing video gams. I cold lern mor math in 1 howr. We cold get an XBOX360 on sunday or satrday becous on a week day I wold have no time to do my homework.
ReplyDeleteLauren, I am not a video game expert. Do you know if there are learning games for XBox 360? Maybe that could be one of the rules. Before you play minecratf, you MUST play the learning games... Just a thought. Good Luck! I agree with your dad that outside play time is so good for you.
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